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You have not a voice, so that you can whisper.
Then how will you your secret tell?
When you say nothing.
Because you cannot.

You have not color, for the daylight to see.
So how may I know of your secret, do tell me?
When there is now nothing to look upon.
Because the light won't let me.

You have not kindness in your inherited temper.
So how can you give away so much?
When all you have is love.
To share.

You are of so many riddles.
Who, you cannot manifest,
Nor profess,
Though I know, you biggest riddle is empathy.
I did this in school some time ago - long time ago, in fact. But what does that matter! I had inspiration from the link below.

So. Enjoy. My first poetry-iece. Ish. :iconthumbs-upplz:

Let me know how you interpret it - it was an assignemnt, so you wont get scolded, if it isn't what I wanted it to be! ^^

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EDIT: :iconfetchingfeast: told me where I could find the origin of the picture, so she shall have gratitud for that. She kinda saved me form copycat'ting something completely.~

EDIT2: HOLY HELL, I GOT 200 FAVOURITES ON THIS?! Argh, I'd never had though it was even possible! My heart is fluttering with your loveliness! :iconiloveitplz:
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ASwingandMiss Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Please note that you are not allowed to use art that you do not own as a written cover even if you cite the reference. You are still in infringement of copyright laws unless you have obtained express permission to actually use the artwork from the owner of the artwork.

I suggest you take down the image or repost the poem without the image until you obtain the original artist's permission, else I will be reporting this piece directly for copyright infringement.

Please be more aware of the law in future.
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ObsessedbySherlock Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.. sorry! I didn't know. The laws of copyright isn't really something I've considered to read, though I probably should, since I'll hopefully be submitting more stuff and get alot of inspiration to my pieces elsewhere. You wouldn't happen to know where I could find them, would you?

Thanks for pointing it out - as I said, I'm not really familiar with the copyright laws in such detail. So thanks for that! ^^
- I will try to remove the picture, if I can work out how. I'm not much of an expert on the submitting your art-part either, sadly. ^^'
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qilorar Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
magical, I love this so much :love:
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ObsessedbySherlock Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I love you! ^^ :heart:
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Nicohus77 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great picture! But where is the poem....?
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ObsessedbySherlock Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh, I don't know. I put it in as a PDF, but maybe your computer doesn't work with those? You can try and download it, if you want to read it. ^^
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Nicohus77 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm I seee well I shall try too find it I suppose!
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ObsessedbySherlock Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've changed the type of document now, so you should be able to see it, as it is not an PDF anymore. It took me some time to figure out, why I couldn't post without a preview-picture, but it should be in order now!
- I hope it solved your problem. Sorry for the trouble I've caused! ^^
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Wolf-of-the-West Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The picture and the poem go hand in hand: fantastic work!
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